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SimplyGold
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0 posted 2002-09-29 10:15 PM



Sleepy am I
Waiting for the dream keeper
my eyes willing to be seduced
wanting to be revealed

The world lies still tonight
I'm weary from the test at hand
Sleep overcomes me for the moment

Let the action begin..

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Kielo
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1 posted 2002-09-29 10:17 PM


This was great! I loved the last line!

Kielo

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2 posted 2002-09-29 10:20 PM




(sigh) This is so heartfelt, sweet friend, I know how you feel because it always seems I am most happiest in my dreams and just wish I could dream all day without anyone waking me and wake only when my sweetheart Joanna is there or something! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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Duncan
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3 posted 2002-09-30 12:05 PM


Waiting for the dream keeper
my eyes willing to be seduced
wanting to be revealed

Don't ya love dreams like that?  Enjoyed the read, SG.

SimplyGold
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4 posted 2002-09-30 10:45 AM


Keilo, Noah, Duncan,

Glad you enjoyed. Good dreaming to you to all!

SG

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2002-10-01 02:26 AM


I'm gonna sleep on this.  Neat poem and thank you for the perfect ending to my Monday.  I think the cameras are starting to roll behind my eyes...
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