Open Poetry #22 |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Sleepy am I Waiting for the dream keeper my eyes willing to be seduced wanting to be revealed The world lies still tonight I'm weary from the test at hand Sleep overcomes me for the moment Let the action begin.. c2002SimplyGold |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
This was great! I loved the last line! Kielo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is so heartfelt, sweet friend, I know how you feel because it always seems I am most happiest in my dreams and just wish I could dream all day without anyone waking me and wake only when my sweetheart Joanna is there or something! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Waiting for the dream keeper my eyes willing to be seduced wanting to be revealed Don't ya love dreams like that? Enjoyed the read, SG. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Keilo, Noah, Duncan, Glad you enjoyed. Good dreaming to you to all! SG |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm gonna sleep on this. Neat poem and thank you for the perfect ending to my Monday. I think the cameras are starting to roll behind my eyes... |
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