Open Poetry #22 |
My Day Beside The Bay |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I come here seeking solitude And to relax out in the sun Many people flock here in Summer But today I'm the only one I look out across the harbour And watch the boats as they sway Another beautiful day in Melbourne Here I sit beside the bay The smell of fresh cut grass Drifts along the salty breeze As my senses come alive Almost causing me to sneeze The seagulls eye me suspiciously Always hoping that I have food But today I sit here writing Enjoying this pensive mood I walk to the end of the jetty Searching as far as the eye can see While absorbing all that surrounds me I lose myself in tranquility I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sometimes it is always the most beautiful feeling to sit alone by the bay, sweet friend, as there is so much beauty and serenity to embrace! (kiss on cheek) Melbourne must be so beautiful, I dream of going there sometime in the near future as the Great Barrier Reef and oceanside and Ayers Rock and everything is majestic to me! (big huggssssss) I love this, sweet friend, the picture is breathtaking too, we all love you so much, just as I hold dear all the wonderful quotes you share with me! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-30-2002 06:42 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
nice poetry Sue - wonderful images well spoken - loved it - Paul |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Pretty poem and it is wonderful to live in such a beautiful spot. Must give you constant inspiration. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This looks so beautiful and peaceful Sue... Would love to spend a day there myself. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Seems you were provided a serene and heavenly place to rest and write. Truly a wonderful gift. I enjoyed this very much and love the picture. Hugs, Marti |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
Love poems about the bay, water etc. Melbourne sounds great too. |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
Love poems about bays and water, etc. Melbourn sounds great too. |
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