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Kitty**
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0 posted 2002-09-28 10:49 PM



Love or Lust

Was it love that you were making
when you shared her bed ?
Because with me it wasn't
it was another reason instead.

Anothers arms can't fill the spot
I hold in my heart for you.
And I often wonder
just what I'm going to do.

If you only knew the heartbreak,
that I've been going through.
With you loving her
and me loving you.

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

© Copyright 2002 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2002-09-28 11:01 PM


the ache pours off the page....(((hugs))) for you
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2 posted 2002-09-28 11:02 PM


Reminds me of a song.....something about
a guy (or a woman)....  living with one
but loving another...  sort of the same
feel....so frustrating,  I am sure..

Beautiful poem of heartache.....

ThUnDeRkYsS
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3 posted 2002-09-30 02:06 PM


Well now, this hits home my dear.  Oh does it ever, you could be penning a COUPLE of my stories... this is very heartfelt and sad.  {{{{{{HUGZ}}}}}}}

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



Hearts_Dance
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4 posted 2002-09-30 02:20 PM


Oh how very painful. You've shared your feeling quite well.
And if these are indeed "your" feelings, and not just a write, then I send you many hugs and warm wishes.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-30 02:51 PM


Oh, Kitty. This is so raw that it feels like it is coming from your personal experience.
---like you're really living through this pain.

~Sending you a loving pink bubble of light!~

EA

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-10-01 03:46 AM


Yes once that lust takes hold of you...look out...it can be strong...James
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