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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-09-29 08:37 PM

kiss a whisper
dream a sweep of hand
that dusts the world with smiles
as it feathers by.
Autumn approaches
and sings wind songs into poet souls
stirring the fire of color
painted in thick wet words.
whisper someone you love a kiss
with your gift
your words
your songs
your poetry
As Autumn stirs fire
with windy hands.
Let us play.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

© Copyright 2002 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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with you

1 posted 2002-09-29 08:39 PM

"whisper someone you love a kiss
with your gift
your words
your songs
your poetry
As Autumn stirs fire"

loved this part....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-09-29 08:45 PM

I have to echo SEA here Jenn...
Those are the most beautiful lines
I have read in a long long time...wonderful!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

The Crimson Knight
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since 2002-09-16

Posts 57
Reno, NV

3 posted 2002-09-29 09:27 PM

I’m all for playing, but, sigh, I’m too far away, sigh, I guess I’ll just have to settle for enjoying the poem

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2002-09-29 10:05 PM

Temptress - soft words you write this night. Autumn, I like it, and what it brings...

BC

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The heart of you

5 posted 2002-09-30 08:33 AM

The play of Autumn always brings the secrets of the wind, and the love of night.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Magician
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6 posted 2002-09-30 08:52 AM

Painted in thick wet words...truly amazing and thought provoking lines in this one Temptress.

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Member Rara Avis

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7 posted 2002-09-30 01:28 PM

Mm,
love the tint
of autumn longing,
a consummation
of thought.

Hearts_Dance
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since 2002-09-30

Posts 31

8 posted 2002-09-30 01:40 PM

I just know I am going to love this place.
You're poem is really quite good.

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