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SEA
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0 posted 2002-09-28 08:50 PM


Their bodies broke the silence
Of night’s deliberate movement
Disturbing the sleep of stars
And blushing the moon
In his pass towards tomorrow
On a bed of feathers, bent

Crucial need, intimate touch
Willful passions unrepent
Heedless of when night would fade
And day wake to reveal a love
They know, no hour could consume
E’er the want be spent


~SEA~
© Copyright 2002 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-28 08:52 PM



YAY!!! And our wonderful Susan returns to grace us all with her beautiful words again, yay!!! (kiss on cheek) This is a beautiuflly captivating and passionate piece, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we're all so happy you're back lighting these pages again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira
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2 posted 2002-09-28 08:53 PM

SEA - nice to see you. Like your write...

BC
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3 posted 2002-09-28 08:55 PM

Well, hi Sea! Where have you been? I haven't seen you in a long time. I am so glad to see you are back. And, with a wonderful poem too.
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4 posted 2002-09-28 08:58 PM

thank you for the kind words, as for where I have been? I moved and it was slow going getting back on line. I just got back on today I came here first I have missed reading everyone very much!!
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5 posted 2002-09-28 08:59 PM

"Disturbing the sleep of stars
And blushing the moon"...

A beautiful way to express a night of love-making.

~ May you disturb the sleep of stars and cause the moon to blush--Often! tehe ~

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thank you, I do my best
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7 posted 2002-09-28 09:01 PM

Welcome home!! This is so good!! We've missed you.
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8 posted 2002-09-28 09:17 PM

Susan,
For that I'd go broke! So thrilled you are back. What a wonderful, romantic write. I've missed you T-O-N-S!!!!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.
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9 posted 2002-09-28 10:48 PM

SEA!!!! Welcome home!! Missed your writings so much. This one is as lovely as I knew it would be. hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.
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10 posted 2002-09-28 10:52 PM

Sue....yes....SUE!!!!!

I have missed your smiles and your most
beautiful poetry...good to see you back
among us again....hope all is well with
you....
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11 posted 2002-09-28 10:58 PM

thank you all so much... I thought of you ALL while off line.....I am doing SUPER looking forward to doing a lot of reading...
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12 posted 2002-09-28 11:18 PM

susan...this is just breath taking...out done yourself...i have missed you and am happy to see your return...helen
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13 posted 2002-09-28 11:43 PM

Hello to you!!!!!
Hey, I moved, too!  Really nice to read ya again, Susan.
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14 posted 2002-09-28 11:45 PM

Good to see you Sea, and this beautiful love poem.
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15 posted 2002-09-29 12:33 PM

"Disturbing the sleep of stars
And blushing the moon"

Man, I wish I'd written those lines!!

And YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY, you finally make it back.  I love you, dear friend...so very glad to have you back here again.   

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn
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16 posted 2002-09-29 01:39 AM

SEA, so so nice to have you again... errr I mean read you. Welcome back.
oh, and what a great write too.

Parker
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17 posted 2002-09-29 01:43 AM

hey you...how the move went well...and? I knew you'd be back with Autumn (time for a cool change...) er...that song reminds me of you, yanno.

Welcome home, Sue.

and oh...YES...this poem...hmmm...if I didn't know better, I'd swear another certain part of me has been telling secrets!
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18 posted 2002-09-29 01:47 AM

thanks friends,   much love to you all and Michael,a special thank you to you, for keeping in touch.....Parker, you sweetie you
Sen!!   you'll have to tell me who sings that song so I can hear it??  

Martie, my hubby loves your Poetry as much as I do, he says you are amazing, I agree  

oh and Cowboy...I hope you had a good move?

[This message has been edited by SEA (09-29-2002 01:51 AM).]
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19 posted 2002-09-29 02:18 AM

Sea? Here ya go....
http://www.lyricsxp.com/lyrics/c/cool_change_little_river_band.html


SEA
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20 posted 2002-09-29 02:23 AM

ah yes, now I remember that song....very cool that you relate that to me...thank you!
(I am a water sign too) (((hugs)))
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21 posted 2002-09-29 03:43 AM

SEA~~Hi... I just wanted to say I really enjoyed this lovely poem. I'm new here and haven't read any of your other poems yet, but after this one, I will be checking the archives and looking for more of your wonderful poems...Paul
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22 posted 2002-09-29 04:07 AM

Good to see you posting your beautiful poetry again, SEA... you've been truly missed!

*hugs*
~tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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23 posted 2002-09-30 08:16 AM

Ah.... again we can sit by the shore and listen to SEA... Nice to see you back!

very softly written...and as always it give a bit of rise to the little green man who in his envy, longs to have such things written about him..

Enjoyed...you have been gone for far too long.
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24 posted 2002-09-30 08:55 AM

Whew...i'm spent reading this SEA.
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25 posted 2002-09-30 01:27 PM

Susan,
Ah,
the gentle sighs
return.
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