Open Poetry #22 |
The Cookie Jar- A tribute to you all |
SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
The Cookie Jar The words come forth like magic From where don't always know From pens and pencils worn and old a flood of thoughts do grow Some speak in deep esoteric terms I admit not always understood But I read on and try to learn as much as anyone could I pay attention with my heart I sing along in ryhme I dance in revel with the sounds in awe of all I find So many visions out there So much talent floating by So little time to catch the star that leaves me far behind If I could stop the world and time extract from it one gift I'd capture all lifes poetry unread, unknown, adrift I'd place it in a cookie jar and plant it in your mind then when you felt the need to touch this cookie jar you'd find [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (09-29-2002 07:28 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What can I say?!? I love your refreshing way of viewing the world and your appreciation of it! P.S. Make sure your poems go into that cookie jar! EA |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you EA.It is you that has inspired me to view my writing differently. From "I hate Spiders" to "Laundry" and e v e r y t h i n g before and inbetween. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wow! You certainly just made my day! You touched me deeply with your reply. It is a thrill to me that in some way I have had an impact on your writing. Thank you so much for that, sweet golden one! ~ May you continue to lift the clouds whenever they try to obscure your sunny view of life! ~ EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, oh my gosh, this is such a wonderful tribute, sweet friend, and I am blessed too to have you as a true friend and I cherish your words and hold them true to my heart with inspiration, you are a delight to us all, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-29-2002 06:03 PM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is wonderful! Can I take a peak in your cookie jar? |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Hey, this is really neat, SimplyGold! I'll be looking forward to what's in the cookie jar. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Noah, There are many cookies in this jar however, yours are the sweetist. Just ask anyone who reads your poems Thank you. SmartChick, Elizabeth, Be prepared when you peek in this jar--for you will find yourselves within. Remember when you open it put back what you let out. Others want to see! Thank you SimplyGold |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SimplyGold - at times I would like to touch what is in that cookie jar... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And this poem, as is your name...simply put.... Simply Gold...... Now, put it in your jar with the rest of the cookies....OK? |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Bill, Magnus, Surely, you recognize that this jar has much of your thoughts swirling round inside. You see this jar contains infinate space and the only way anything comes out is when an iris peeks inside.. Thanks for looking SimplyGold |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
really smoothe flow and sentiment |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, very smooth flow, really enjoyed this |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love the thoughts here!! Wonderful! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
SimplyGold Love the idea of this...very sweet! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the originality in this, Electra... A beautiful piece... ~ loving chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SG, My mom's cookie jar always had a bell in the lid. I like that I don't have to be so sneaky with your cookie jar. And by the way, excellent write. They're right it is smooth. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is beautiful, very creative, I love it. |
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