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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-08-17 10:12 AM


This time
~By Sue~

Your word to me has never been good
Now you expect me to believe what you say
Promises you always made, you never kept
How can I? You're no different today

You just all of a sudden tear my life apart
Leaving me with no explanation at all
Letting the family and friends think that it is me
When, it was you who decided to make this call

All of the drinking you have been doing
Seems to have really messed up your mind
Your thinking seems to be so irrational
Now, you tell me, you just need some time

Do you really think that after you get finished
I will still be right here waiting for you
After you get through doing what you are doing
You better think again, because now I am through

After all of these years, giving all I had to give
You just all of a sudden decide your going to leave
Without even an explanation as to why
For you to do this, sometimes is hard to believe

Too many times you have wanted to play your games
This time, it really isn't up to you, it's up to me
You went way too far with your irrational thinking
I do not want you to ever come back to live with me

8-16-02




[This message has been edited by SmartChick (08-17-2002 10:24 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-08-17 11:38 AM


aha! this fits your poetic name to a tee!

I know someone that spent 37 years putting up with it, to still end up betrayed in the end.

The one who left I don't really think got over regretting his leaving.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2002-08-17 11:38 AM


SmartChick - seems as if you have been going through some trials and tribulations. Only this time you have made a decision. Hang in there, and the best to you...

BC

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3 posted 2002-08-17 11:57 AM


SweetSuzieQ~
You grow in your strength and resolve...
Love n' hugs ... glad you're back on~
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2002-08-17 12:29 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sue, I'm so happy you're back, and though my heart cries out to you and the trials you face I know you are making a wonderful decision that with your strength and love will only take you forward soon to all your heart truly deserves! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) I am here if you ever need someone to talk to, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Elizabeth
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5 posted 2002-08-17 01:44 PM


You sure got the point across in this one!

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Alan
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6 posted 2002-08-17 01:47 PM


Sue..this is a good write. Should it be true, hang in there, yoou have made the right choice.
alan

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7 posted 2002-10-17 02:34 PM


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8 posted 2002-12-30 03:13 PM


I know it well...
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