Open Poetry #22 |
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Watching As She Goes |
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nichola_louise Junior Member
since 2002-08-17
Posts 24Adelaide, Australia |
You watch her as she turns, as she turns and walks away. Her shoulders slumped and footsteps slow, you can't think what to say. The pain it hits you deep within, hers or yours, who knows but you just stand there watching, watching as she goes. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I like your work, nichola...this is one profound snapshot of poetry. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I sure did like this one a lot, reminds me of someone I know |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I enjoyed this poem!!! Neeraja |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is sad, and i loved it the first time, it slipped through...let's put it back to the top so more folks can read it |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thanks to passing shadows for bringing this poem back to light of day. I had missed it the first time 'round, but I'm glad I didn't this time! Take Care Earth Angel |
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