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Open Poetry #22

Watching As She Goes

nichola_louise
Junior Member

since 2002-08-17

Posts 24
Adelaide, Australia

0 posted 2002-08-19 02:43 AM

You watch her as she turns,
as she turns and walks away.
Her shoulders slumped and footsteps slow,
you can't think what to say.

The pain it hits you deep within,
hers or yours, who knows
but you just stand there watching,
watching as she goes.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-08-19 04:25 AM

I like your work, nichola...this is one profound snapshot of poetry.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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2 posted 2002-08-19 04:35 AM

I sure did like this one a lot, reminds me of someone I know

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

3 posted 2002-08-21 08:24 AM

I enjoyed this poem!!!

Neeraja

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-09-16 12:11 PM

this is sad, and i loved it the first time, it slipped through...let's put it back to the top so more folks can read it

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-09-16 12:43 PM

Thanks to passing shadows for bringing this poem back to light of day. I had missed it the first time 'round, but I'm glad I didn't this time!

Take Care
Earth Angel

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