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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-16 10:24 AM



I ask myself in moment of digress
a time of weakness more or less
why though the time is very late
I stay entombed within your hate.

Escape was once my soulful pledge
taking me close to the edge
why not take the step alone
away from your self-righteous drone.

Is this sickness mine instead
am I drawn into your sense of dread
beautiful in your depressive scorn
upon my back the lashes worn.

Tattooed pain I wear with pride
diseased I live afloat your chide
absorbing pieces of distant love
martyred by each perfect shove.

Why not take flight from this hell
my words, weak utters, I do tell
there's beauty in this prison cell
you play the wounded so damn well.

WhiteRose

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
1 posted 2002-09-16 10:29 AM


ouch! Fly away!  this was me a couple of years ago...painful place..well done
to you!
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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2 posted 2002-09-16 10:34 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Anne, I hope this is behind you now, sweet friend, I know this feeling and truly we can all have a tendency to bring it all out on ourselves but once we overcome the hatred we forgive our hearts! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-09-16 10:39 AM


Methinks ye got yer ire up!---and you expressed it so well that I can reach out and touch it! Yikes! It's hot!

You made your point---and very well at that!

~ smiles ~
Linda

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
4 posted 2002-09-16 12:46 PM


Thank you so much for your responses. I've been having a heck of time with pip these days. I can only post one message at a time then it refuses to let me back in. If I see the "the page cannot be displayed" message one more time I am going to scream!!

*whew* calming down now.

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