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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-09-28 07:25 PM



I can't describe in paintings
what I can bring to song
I cannot chant to music
thoughts I write in poem
I cannot perfectly portray
beauty before my eyes
nor with breathless clarity
convey my lover's sighs
I can't recount in detail
the depth of my despair
or the happiness I feel
when someone shows they care
the very least that I can do
is share a part of me
the same great way as all of you
through love of poetry...

~Tier
9/02

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

© Copyright 2002 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2002-09-28 07:33 PM


Tier--

You CAN describe
You CAN chant
You CAN perfectly portray
You CAN convey
You CAN recount

-----and you DO!!! --and so very well at that!

And thank you for sharing a part of you with this and every other poem that you write!

Linda

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2 posted 2002-09-28 07:38 PM




(big hugggsssss) Oh Tiersdin, I echo EVERYTHING Linda just said and I add that with a golden heart like yours and following it you CAN achieve anything! (kiss on cheek) We all believe in you, sweet friend, God Bless You, you have the heart of a talented poet, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wranx
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3 posted 2002-09-28 08:02 PM


lovely, Tier
and you do it so well.
~Ed

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4 posted 2002-09-28 08:30 PM


Wonderful writing Tier!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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5 posted 2002-09-28 10:38 PM


And you do share so poetically, and always with a tender heart.
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6 posted 2002-09-28 10:48 PM


So much of your heart is in your words.
So  excellent, a tender a poem...
thanks for sharing
hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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7 posted 2002-09-28 11:06 PM


I TOTALLY ENJOYED THIS!!
Great writing and thoughts...

Kitty

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

Kellie_Cantrell
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8 posted 2002-09-29 12:08 PM


Earth angel portrayed my thoughts as well, I am going to make sure i read more of your work its beautiful
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9 posted 2002-09-29 12:16 PM


Your expression, as always...perfect poetry.
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10 posted 2002-09-30 09:13 AM


And, in poetry, we find those pieces.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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11 posted 2002-09-30 01:26 PM


Tier,
I love the giving nature of this poem
and its grace.

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