Open Poetry #22 |
Vow Of My Friendship |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Vow Of My Friendship to you I make this vow forever I shall soothe your brow you I shall never desert in joy or in hurt I am always here to gently calm all your fear and this is where I shall stay I am just a breath away and be your strength when scared never alone but shared this is my vow it shall always be forever can you count on me I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Lucky be those, that receive a pledge, such as this. Took a bit from my cynicism, thanks. ~Ed In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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turtlefreak1979 Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 20~turtle lane~ |
wonderful.....wonderful.....wonderful!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very lucky friend you have |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Helen~Truly a wonderful poem and vow. It really seems to go hand and hand with one you posted a day or two ago, " Sweet Dessert" They seem like they were written for each other. Both of them show such love and dedication. Enjoyed...Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-29-2002 03:09 AM).] |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This needs to be bumped, because I heard these words over 24 years ago. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
I think this poem has great flow. Friendship is what makes the world go around. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I knew it! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
This is a powerful and comforting piece, either given or received ! Thanks for sharing. S Arthur |
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