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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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New York

0 posted 2002-09-28 11:48 AM


Larry just inspired this. Thanks Larry!!


Choices

Everyday you will be given trials
you can learn from them
or you can blame them on something else

You are given choices
whether you make the right ones or not
is entirely up to you

God has set a path of choices he wishes you to have
and these are lessons you will learn
the ones you make bad choices with all along
he will teach you the lesson until it is learned

begin a new day with a new attitude
on of faith and purity
innosence captured and released
an emotional rollercoaster but you will enjoy
the trill of it all

Everyday you go by learing your lessons
I will be going through my own.
God is in this place
Taking us and leading us
These trials that we're going through
are a good thing
even if they look bad
They are just in disquise



© Copyright 2002 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2002-09-28 11:52 AM


a lot of wisdom packed in this one

I have to admit this line has me confused:

"the ones you make bad choices with all along"

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
2 posted 2002-09-28 11:58 AM


VAS- thanks. the line is refering to the lessons that you make bad choices over and over again with. And you will keep learing the lessons until you finally make the right choice.

Thanks Kels

Miah
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2002-09-28 12:11 PM


Very true indeed.  Well done. thanks for the read.
Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
4 posted 2002-09-28 12:27 PM


Miah- Thanks.
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
5 posted 2002-09-30 02:12 PM


A wonderful message of hope and the fact that we all need a constant reminder of some things... especially this, I needed to here this today, thank you for giving it to me.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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