Open Poetry #22 |
Does anyone really know? |
Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Clocks, lately I’ve noticed none tell the same time so I am always gaining here, losing there it has occurred to me to synchronize but then… I might really know what time it is and I wouldn’t have a clue what to do with the knowledge |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
lol. very cool poem. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Hi Duncan! So what time is it, really? LOL Shenachie |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
i doubt anyone does... but nice of you to ask. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I LOVE THIS. I tend to tell time by watching shadows on the wall... This runs deeper than the literal. Smile--and my reply tends to apply to both as well! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Time is relative….it goes relatively too quick for my liking….says she who’s going to be late for work if she doesn’t spend her time more wisely by getting in the shower!! Lol You can never win or lose |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
shades of Chicago's hit song...you pen the relevency of time and truth into a verse to let us ponder again does it matter...and if it does, what would we do with the knowledge. Enjoyed my friend... but then I always enjoy your words. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
IT'S TIME TO GO TO THE BEACH!!!! pssssst hey Dunc ... guess what? (I'm not a beach virgin anymore) dont tell anyone... It might tarnish me mothy reputation) LMAO |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - just think, if you loose some one day, and then gain the next, one is just about even. It all works out... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee Duncan..you reminded me that it soon will be time to change the clocks again.. Maybe I'll leave a few this fall... that way I won't get so depressed when it gets dark so early... Good write! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thoughts about time always intrigue me. This is great. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Duncan, these are such wonderful thoughts, sweet friend, it too is almost daylight savings and I am not quite prepared for it either and would ather adjust it by what time it really feels like, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
ROFL - I was just coming back to say thanks for getting the song stuck in my head all day, and ROn's already mentioned it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice little piece, I enjoyed this one...and have felt the same way...I've even reset the clocks on different minutes when the power goes out |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
As Darius sang, "Time, why you punish me?" I always take time to read your musings. And no, it isn't for punishment. LOL. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
D You're so philosophical time can be our friend and our worse enemy...every minute counts...so much to tell about time...I love the thoughts in your poem. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm thinkin it's time for you to say hello....to me! I have missed reading you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
Im sorry I have a totally different song stuck in my head which is totally irrelevant..Rolling Stones.."Time is on my side..yes it is.." *shrugs* I'm sorry I had caffiene today Consider yourself fuzzed |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
O.K. Time out Duncan, Time and time again I've told you that I love your poems. (especially this one, very kool) Time is on my side said Nick Jagger. What do you think he did with all that knowledge??Still crazy after all these years SimplyGold |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
I like this, simple, true, perfect. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Hearts_Dance Junior Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 31 |
I have 6 clocks in my house and none of them tell the same time. I am always guessing. |
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