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Redneck_13
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since 2002-09-19
Posts 8
Arkansas, USA

0 posted 2002-09-28 12:05 PM



The beauty of nature never seems to disappoint me,
And once again its perfection I see.
Something as simple as your smiles
Could bring joy to the loneliest of miles.
Looking into your angel eyes
My heart begins to let out solemn sighs;
For it knows that this angel is held away,
Because her heart, with another, might stay.
There are many things to keep this apart,
But I guess we'll never know if we never start.
You’re so sweet and so beautiful,
And your heart is so joyful.
You have no idea how special you are,
Or how your face lights up like a star
When I make a sweet comment.
Anyone who lost you would lament,
Because they would have just lost, the best,
The Prize held above all the rest.
To hold you forever would be perfection,
Because True Love would have a resurrection.


© Copyright 2002 Benjamin Daniel Clayton II - All Rights Reserved
ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
1 posted 2002-09-28 10:27 PM


nice sentiment..it's hard to put emotion into good words..don't you find so..or does it come easy to you?


BrokenAngel
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since 2002-01-06
Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA
2 posted 2002-10-18 10:51 AM


I wanna know how you always know what to say at the right time or how I always manage to stumble onto just the right poem done by you.  I love this one, very heart felt.  Havent talked to you in a while, miss ya redhot!!

~*~*~Night Angel

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