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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-09-27 02:27 PM



Some are gone.
Life goes on.
No one won.
All have lost.
The sun rose.
The sun set.
Moon man cries,
don't forget.
Some are gone.
Life goes on.
Can we be
God's chosen?
Life goes on.
'least for now.
The ants march.


© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-27 02:34 PM


I love this piece. Wonderful job writing out a thought. It describes mine perfectly!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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2 posted 2002-09-27 03:01 PM




(sigh) Oh Kacy, this is wonderful and so very true, acceptance is a hard thing to possess sometimes but we must let life go on and wish all the best and to win! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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3 posted 2002-09-27 04:01 PM


Kris, thanks for sharing in this thought.
Noah, yes, life goes on for some of us.

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4 posted 2002-09-27 08:33 PM


That's what they say. But, my life seems to be at a stand still.
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5 posted 2002-09-27 08:52 PM


Maybe standing still is where you need to be right now, to give you time to choose your next pathway? Peace to you, and remember you always have friends to talk with in this family.
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6 posted 2002-09-27 09:03 PM


Excellent write Kacy..
Love the rhythm.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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7 posted 2002-09-27 09:34 PM


Succinct!---To the point!

An economy of words produced a surplus of thoughts. Very cleverly done!

EA

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8 posted 2002-09-30 02:21 PM


Such a wonderful write, we all go through these things, as have I this last summer and yes, life does go on... it has to, great job here in so few words, I like this much.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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