Open Poetry #22 |
God's will? |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Some are gone. Life goes on. No one won. All have lost. The sun rose. The sun set. Moon man cries, don't forget. Some are gone. Life goes on. Can we be God's chosen? Life goes on. 'least for now. The ants march. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I love this piece. Wonderful job writing out a thought. It describes mine perfectly!! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Kacy, this is wonderful and so very true, acceptance is a hard thing to possess sometimes but we must let life go on and wish all the best and to win! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Kris, thanks for sharing in this thought. Noah, yes, life goes on for some of us. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
That's what they say. But, my life seems to be at a stand still. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Maybe standing still is where you need to be right now, to give you time to choose your next pathway? Peace to you, and remember you always have friends to talk with in this family. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Kacy.. Love the rhythm. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Succinct!---To the point! An economy of words produced a surplus of thoughts. Very cleverly done! EA |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Such a wonderful write, we all go through these things, as have I this last summer and yes, life does go on... it has to, great job here in so few words, I like this much. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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