Open Poetry #22 |
Someone Special |
T Member
since 2000-04-27
Posts 107USA |
Forever entwined Forbidden pleasures realized Twisted souls yearning for more Not to be abandoned Never to be forgotten Painful love, the price. T. [This message has been edited by T (09-26-2002 12:30 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ooh. Ah. The colors. I enjoyed this, T. Nice twistin' ending. Mike |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sounds like one should look deep before one leaps-----into bed! tehe Take care--always! EA |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very nice poem, so few words with so much meaning. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very sensual....enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I like it when they make it hurt so good!! Nice job with this shortie!! I enoyed it, T!! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is beautifully sensual and bittersweet, BRAVO, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet T, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA |
short, sweet, perfect. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Nicely done! Enjoyed! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
T - nice write... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions enjoyed |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Forever entwined... ...painful love, the price. Ouch! A sad love story indeed. I could feel the pain bleed from your pen! Well Done T ~Sheri |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
The pain of love, when love is denied. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Hearts_Dance Junior Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 31 |
I have read so much sadness today. Painful love is not easy, but at times it seems to be the hardest let go of. |
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