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She Looked at You [repost for Marge, finally, with a portrait!]
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She Looked at You [repost for Marge, finally, with a portrait!] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 She Looked At You She stood quite quiet, she emoted cool Just one look at her, yes, nobody's fool; Her temper soothing, her demeanor so calm She was restful to see, no uttered qualm… But when she looked at you… First, you're taken in by her eyes of green Fine lined wrinkles of smiles often seen Straight-away she gazes at you so steadily Right back into your eyes, as your soul she sees… Next, her body is perfect, for a woman her age, You can see she's been hugged, perhaps walked a stage; No airs nor swagger, nor feminine wiles She's solid, not stolid, she'll go many more miles. But when she looked at you… There was something about her, it was in the air Not a forbidden scent no, something beyond compare, Ah, something about her, yes, you may think… It was when she captured your soul, with her quiet wink. She stood there poised, but just on the brink She watched your face, she knows what you think; Quiet contemplation, with face quiet, serene, But her wink brought to mind, a laughing queen. So when she looked at you… She made you quite pleased to be in the same room you caught yourself without your present gloom, She lit up your life, more than you liked to think From all that she gave you, one quick little wink. ~*~ 22 November, 1999 revised, 31 May 2002 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-27-2002 07:47 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Absolutely adorable Karilea! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Wonderful write....(and where did you get that picture of Balladeer before his surgery?)... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) I love this, sweet friend, you always have such a gentle grace in your words that puts thoughts in still-life, I love it, you always look upon us all with talent and your sun-shining smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Toe's reply! This is beautiful Karilea...loved the morning read. ~Hugs~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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