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Hapless
Junior Member
since 2002-09-22
Posts 10
NY, USA

0 posted 2002-09-26 08:43 PM


(about an ex)

Loved.
Missed.
I love you.
I love you too.
Don't push me away like this.
Never call me again.
Longed for.
Risked for.
Sacrificed for.
Abandoned by.


Thoughts and critiques?

© Copyright 2002 Josh - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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Senior Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
1 posted 2002-09-26 10:20 PM


Nice two-sided piece.

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Kitty**
Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
2 posted 2002-09-27 12:17 PM


Get it together Darling!
How is she suppose to respond to
this: I love you, Don't ever call me again???
Tell her the TRUE facts and remember that
time does heal all !
My very best to you. I've been there and done that!!! It was no picnic, but I'm
BETTER then before and you will be to!!

Hugs
Kitty

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