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Open Poetry #22

Until the sun arises...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2002-09-25 08:22 PM

I'm tired of people
wearing their tears
on their sleeves
like cufflinks,
banging their heads like cymbals,
beating out lifeless
syllables
of indifference.
You're different.
I caught a glimpse of you --
simple
and laid back.
I found you -- a needle
in the haystack
of imbeciles.
Open your eyes now!
Let me harbor you
in my arms
until the sun arises.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-25 08:29 PM

I like this poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Crazy Eddie
Member

since 2002-09-14

Posts 178

2 posted 2002-09-25 08:36 PM

I like this, maybe it’s the imbecile in me recognising my own syllable beating as an attempt to be somebody’s needle. Then again maybe it’s just a very well written piece.

Thanks for the chance to read and reply.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-09-25 08:41 PM

Master...
you have not lost your touch.
This is very special...
to every reader.

Thank you!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2002-09-25 08:45 PM

"Open your eyes now!
Let me harbor you
in my arms
until the sun arises"

what a great thought of comfort...wonderful poem...(just 1 problem...sorry i just can not call you master...(giggle)...helen

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

5 posted 2002-09-26 03:19 PM

First line is a gem

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-09-26 03:25 PM

Open your eyes now!
Let me harbor you
in my arms
until the sun arises.
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Love this piece!!
Oooooh Yessss!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

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