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reborn love
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reborn love |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
Weight carried Stinging words Brutal pain Silence heard Painful visions Cries released Hope is renewed Arguments ceased Love renewed Brand new day Open hearts Here to stay Life moves on Stepping forward Fateful path Heading toward Past let go Iridescent sin Faith was found Deep within Newborn love Standing tall Was always there Underneath it all |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
The last two stanzas in this one speak a lot! Nicely done! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Great thoughts.. I really love your poems.. Nice written... Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Reborn love can be a very beautiful thing! Relationships are often scrapped when the going gets a little bit rough, but if you look "deep", and if the relationship is worth saving, you will see the value of it and work to get it back on track. As they say, true love conquers all! EA |
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Paddy Member
since 2002-09-23
Posts 52Straya |
Good on you for taking the time to sort it out. Dunno how you did it. Wish I did What's your secret? I guess one becomes content with one’s poetry when one opens the book ten years hence and does NOT exclaim, “Did I really write this?” |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
Haha. Theres no secret... I guess I just knew to distinguish the difference between feeling guilt and remorse and what was truly a mistake contrasted to something that was needed.. Thank you for saying you love my poems  I dont think anyones ever told me that But thank you |
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