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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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0 posted 2002-09-25 01:11 PM



I see through veil of thought,
a window to remembrance

Visions offered there in mind
memories of another time.
Played in the now,
yet out of sync.
I ponder not
too hard to think.

My eyes did wish
for blindness then!
Why must I see?
I fear the when!

~~~~~~

But upon a moment of repose
a thought or two to come to know.

These illusionary vapors
just connected thoughts in time.

Not flesh and blood, mere thought they are
I'll not let them put upon.

I rally strength in weakness.
A vision, simply that
I'll forget, I must forget
relieve my heart at last.

I've time to make more dreams
this is what I'll seek.

Yes, time
just give me time....

WhiteRose

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-25 01:12 PM


Very good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-25 02:26 PM




(smiles) Yes, keep dreaming and believe in what you dream as visions are more than just holographic images in your mind but a reflection of the beautiful you! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

3 posted 2002-09-25 08:53 PM


I rally strength in weakness.
A vision, simply that
I'll forget, I must forget
relieve my heart at last


Oh my goodness I can't begin2tell ya how much I enjoyed reading this poem...
I struggle2find the rite words to convey2you, the writer, just how powerful, and purely captivating your expression is...
Thanx4the read PoetFriend...
Smiles2u
*~coco~*

Miah
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2002-09-25 09:28 PM


Another wonderful poem by you.
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