Open Poetry #22 |
A Vision |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I see through veil of thought, a window to remembrance Visions offered there in mind memories of another time. Played in the now, yet out of sync. I ponder not too hard to think. My eyes did wish for blindness then! Why must I see? I fear the when! ~~~~~~ But upon a moment of repose a thought or two to come to know. These illusionary vapors just connected thoughts in time. Not flesh and blood, mere thought they are I'll not let them put upon. I rally strength in weakness. A vision, simply that I'll forget, I must forget relieve my heart at last. I've time to make more dreams this is what I'll seek. Yes, time just give me time.... WhiteRose |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very good write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yes, keep dreaming and believe in what you dream as visions are more than just holographic images in your mind but a reflection of the beautiful you! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I rally strength in weakness. A vision, simply that I'll forget, I must forget relieve my heart at last Oh my goodness I can't begin2tell ya how much I enjoyed reading this poem... I struggle2find the rite words to convey2you, the writer, just how powerful, and purely captivating your expression is... Thanx4the read PoetFriend... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Another wonderful poem by you. |
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