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Frustrated
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Frustrated, Feeling raped, Everything taken, Raked away… Life is no more, A slave to goals, To others, And to wants, The wishes- Left unfed… Killers of night, Haunt as I sleep, A kilt of fiction, Bind me as I shiver, In the blood river… My mocking shadow, Seeks other, To hide behind, For the coward in me Has died… Mind races, To a stop! Brimless space, Keeping with the pace, Analyze this case… Clues left dormant, No connection made, Remove your shade, Ha- Human made… Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Very interesting write! A lot of action, and some sarcastic anger is felt in these lines. Nice job! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are just spilling all or your thoughts and feelings right out there. Very effectively laid out. A very raw and potent write. EA |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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