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Beyond The Walls
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Beyond The Walls |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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Beyond the thickened walls I place not to protect, but to erase. I live with saddened heart of pain. Yet still I long for love again. Cursed with feelings running deep and in the midst of morbid weep, I yearn for love to crash the gate. This dark desire then to sate. I know the wall a bit too strong. Perchance it blocks a lovers song I'm ever close with hearkened ear, listening soft, for love to hear. WhiteRose |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very Good Write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I've taken a liking to reading your writing PoetFriendWR... And I thank you, for yet another 'touching' read that you've provided me2nite... Smiles2u... *~coco~* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Anne, this is wonderful, sweet friend, and may love answer back to you through the walls and into your heart, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
and in the midst of morbid weep... I love that line. I thought it was going to be about something else because of the title, but I was pleasantly surprised again at your work. |
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