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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-09-25 12:41 PM



You draw me closer
In a field of broken dreams
You give me color

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
Miah
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1 posted 2002-09-25 12:51 PM


Very beautiful.  Packs a punch in just those few lines.  
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2 posted 2002-09-25 02:44 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may love always paint your heart with happy colors, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

(continues to send angel hugs of healing to your sister)

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-09-25 03:42 PM


I hope your sister gets better. Great write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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