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Open Poetry #22

Heart Bleeds (haiku)

Fandaen
Junior Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 47
Ft Worth, Texas

0 posted 2002-09-24 11:11 AM

My heart bleeds raw love
Pumping all it can give you
Freely giving life

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-09-24 01:37 PM

Hehehe---I always was a fan of haiku! ^_^ Good job! I liked it---it was cute! ~_^

All I do, is think about you...

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-24 03:57 PM

Awesome job

Cold hands means a warm heart

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2002-09-24 07:29 PM

Fandaen how yuh doin. this haiku is cool for sure.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-24 09:22 PM

(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you and your loves hearts forever beat with the beauty of true love, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

5 posted 2002-09-24 10:37 PM

A splendid write FanDaen...
*~coco~*

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