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White Space |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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Even this small white space mocks me, with it's generic white emptiness. This is technology. Still white, still empty, still laughing, at my attempt at poetry. And I miss the sheer pleasure of crinkling it up, and tossing it in the trash. WhiteRose |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Anne, this is wonderfully thought-provoking, sweet friend, I have always thought of the white space to be so significant in poetry, almost as if it represents how much the poet wants to reveal in his or her words and the white is that which is hidden and wishes for you to think what is meant to be there! (big hugggsssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Grab a piece of paper...it is real, and it does feels good to crinkle it up and toss it away, like a bad day. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
WhiteRose - doncha all do that no moe, ya heere... Your poetry is fine... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
WhiteRose - I don't think you "attempt" to write poetry, I believe you do an awesome job of it!! Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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