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0 posted 2002-09-25 06:10 PM


The not so black and whites.

Bruised and battered
Cod and, chips
away at all thats, left
foot first out of the, door
bell impatiently, rings
around the, eye
witness to the, beaten
eggs whipped into a, batter(ed)
bruised and gently sobbing.

Andrew

it’s not your makeup that fades
just the illusion of happiness
that has slowly decayed
          

© Copyright 2002 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-25 06:15 PM


Sad poem!!!! Great write

Cold hands means a warm heart

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