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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast

0 posted 2002-09-24 04:20 PM



Oh, the names
Wrapped in pretty
Cellophane
Crackling colors
Of crimson
Swing beneath the
Scythe

Lies and shame
Warped pictures
From a mind insane
Boisterously hisses
Opinions
Begging life
To die

Mask of fame
Textured disembodied
Brain
Drip drop bones
Of soul's refrain
Delusions reason
Why...

~Tier
9/02

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (09-24-2002 04:23 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-24 04:25 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
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2 posted 2002-09-24 04:26 PM


Interesting transformation from top to bottom. Nice one!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
3 posted 2002-09-25 01:14 AM


Whoa! there's some old school Tier.

Loved it lady.

~Ed

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-09-25 01:48 PM


Strangely,
this felt like unwrapping
a cellophane skeleton.

Sheesh, I might have to use that now.

I'm glad yr postin'.

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
5 posted 2002-09-25 06:05 PM


Thanks Loner, Kris, Ed, & Mikey...

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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