Open Poetry #22 |
Love In Full Bloom |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
A life without love is like a heart without a beat a garden without sun or an ocean without the tide And for me to be without you would be like a left hand without a right a body without a soul or a crown without its jewels When you came into my life the sun came out from the clouds my garden was in full bloom and my heart opened its door to love You are the spring in my step the radiance behind my smile and my very reason for living Together we create the most beautiful symphony I am in motion |
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Crysania Member
since 2002-09-21
Posts 67Lost in a dream. (Please don't wake!) |
*breathes in rapture* Beau-ti-ful. *eyes get the dreamy look they always take on when drifting off into a land of eternal bliss* That was beautiful...I hope I can write like you one day. Like all the people on this site. Until then, I hope a am further allowed the privilage to read and enjoy your and others' works of art, such as this one. - Crysania |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sue, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, you always write the most sensitive and heartfelt romance and the tulip picture just had me imagining holding Joanna's hand and walking the miles with her! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, this is the perfect love poem. Gosh, I really adore it. Nice writing. I think you must be madly in love!!! '...Together we create the most beautiful symphony...' What a special way to say, I Love You. Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sue - romance - love - sharing - you write it all so very well - Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue~A really beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing it with us...Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-27-2002 11:20 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...James |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
When you came into my life the sun came out from the clouds my garden was in full bloom and my heart opened its door to love
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