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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-09-23 06:51 PM




A life without love
is like a heart without a beat
a garden without sun
or an ocean without the tide

And for me to be without you
would be like a left hand
without a right
a body without a soul
or a crown without its jewels

When you came into my life
the sun came out from the clouds
my garden was in full bloom
and my heart opened its door
to love

You are the spring in my step
the radiance behind my smile
and my very reason for living
Together we create the most
beautiful symphony

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Crysania
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since 2002-09-21
Posts 67
Lost in a dream. (Please don't wake!)
1 posted 2002-09-23 07:03 PM


*breathes in rapture* Beau-ti-ful. *eyes get the dreamy look they always take on when drifting off into a land of eternal bliss*

That was beautiful...I hope I can write like you one day. Like all the people on this site. Until then, I hope a am further allowed the privilage to read and enjoy your and others' works of art, such as this one.

- Crysania

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-23 07:24 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, you always write the most sensitive and heartfelt romance and the tulip picture just had me imagining holding Joanna's hand and walking the miles with her! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
3 posted 2002-09-23 09:13 PM


Sue, this is the perfect love poem. Gosh, I really adore it. Nice writing. I think you must be madly in love!!!

'...Together we create the most
beautiful symphony...'

What a special way to say, I Love You.

Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386
Ohio, USA
4 posted 2002-09-27 11:37 AM


Sue - romance - love - sharing - you write it all so very well - Paul
Paul Wilson
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5 posted 2002-09-27 11:20 PM


Sue~A really beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing it with us...Paul

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-27-2002 11:20 PM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2002-09-30 12:46 PM


Fantastic...James
rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
7 posted 2002-09-30 07:24 AM


When you came into my life
the sun came out from the clouds
my garden was in full bloom
and my heart opened its door
to love



A lovely surrender. Such a happy entrance to warmth inside our secret gardens. So good to read you Sue. Hugs to you.

Sincerely,
Reg

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