Open Poetry #22 |
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A Moment Of Silence |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia ![]() |
A Moment Of Silence Some bow their heads while others are loaned a moment Some begin it while the others end I stop and reality breaks my heart That not even a soul can mend... The stillness always finds me when I'm already to the ground And, I watch myself from the other side of heaven looking down Surrounded in immense quiet everywhere Just watching myself in an empty stare... Going nowhere but always in search for my friend As duty calls and I'm left with what I see A little life falls with every tear in his name Oh, you just don't know how hard it is to breathe... Especially when I inhale sorrows plan And, when missing him has both my hands I'm on the other side of heaven looking down And, on the edge of lonely I can be found... It's a moment of silence that I never expected I didn't have time to fold my hands in prayer Not a warning that I can remember at all Just all of the sudden he was there... So, I gather so broken pieces of me Go back to the visions I silently see Pride at my side I wipe away the tears Oh, I sure look sad from up here... Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
You know, this really made me think and take a quick glance at my life. Now I must go and take a harder look. Thank you Saunni, for this fantasticly penned, thought provoking piece! ~Sheri |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Saunni, this sounds so very sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright and now these tears are out of your heart, my thoughts and heart go out to you and may you find that cloud on the bright side of heaven to bask upon, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Moonlight Romeo![]() ![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
In that moment, I see that you knew your heart. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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