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China Dolll
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China Dolll |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
China Doll Fragil little china doll Skin bruised so easily Vintage wisdom your words come slowly Tales you tell of years gone by people long passed still linger in your dreams Friendships that come alive in the deep recesses of the night mindful of mornings realities Little worries of others keep you mindful of your fragility Your watchful eye keeps vigil for the opportunity to connect You linger in aloneness reaching out to the young. You hear the anguish of those that come after you You offer comfort with the memories of your own struggles Selfless with more to lose with every passing moment I respect you little China Doll I Love you Grand ma ma... c2002SimplyGold |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is soooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, I cried reading this as I know your wonderful grandmother will when she reads this, she must be a true angel just as you are, God Bless You Both always, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a beautiful way to say I love you to your grandma. Simply golden feelings. Thank you for sharing this warm tenderness. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
This brought tears to my eyes... lovely writing. ~Tier  "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
So precious, a Grandmother... and even more precious is they way you let us all see her. So sweet! ~Sheri |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you Tierdin and Irie, This is the magic we get from our Grandmothers. Yours, mine and others who care. Thanks for reading and commenting. SimplyGold |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed very much...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Simplygold, your Grandmother would be so proud of what you have written here, I have read it a few times and find it a stunning piece of work, thank you for sharing it here with us all. Sincerely Rick |
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