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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-23 12:41 PM



Seasonally Romanced with 1slick_lady and Professor Gloom


Seasonally romance me with color,
With your style and sensation of pleasure,
Feel the wind that catches the rainbow leaves
And sends them swirling on the Autumn breeze.

you see the shades of me
the tint of my desire
I wear it close to me
the color of my attire

Seasonally romance me with your sound,
You soft sighs and joyful laughter unbound,
Shuffle in piles of Jacob cloaks from trees,
Take a rake and pile them up where you please.

you swirl my emotions
all my senses fall
when your hearts beats
it is mine in recall

Seasonally romance me with your play,
Make me unaware of the passing day,
Let me watch you run scattering leaves,
That clings to your leggings and sweater sleeves.

dance me under moon lit night
until our shadows grow long
the place where we blend together
where it is I belong

Seasonally romance me with your feel
Touch me soft make this fantasy be real,
Stay with me beneath swirling color breeze,
To me buried in loving touch of trees.


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-23 12:42 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-09-23 12:44 PM


Nice mix!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Professor Gloom
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3 posted 2002-09-23 12:48 PM


I couldn't have done it without you,
with your fine words of inspiration of the other poem.
So this is mostly 1slick_lady's

Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (09-23-2002 12:49 PM).]

1slick_lady
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4 posted 2002-09-23 12:56 PM


gloom you were the pleasure
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5 posted 2002-09-23 01:23 PM


Bravo!! Excellent write you two! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-09-23 01:28 PM


What an absolutely delightful duet!!
You two work so well together!
Fantastic write!!
~Hugs to you both~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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7 posted 2002-09-23 01:31 PM


Lookit you two! Dancing in the leaves!!! Helen, you KNOW Autumn is my favorite season--what's not to love? we get a break from this New Orleans steam--football season starts--kids go back to school--football season--and I've got this thing for WIND--and did I mention football season? And Gloom? It's lovely to see ya so light and airy!

A delight to read!

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