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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-09-23 12:52 PM


In a blank void called a mind
That nothing can occupy
Being so uniquely original
Where no other clones can duplicate

This space of creativity
Existence with all the emotions of man
Form the deepest sorrows
To the highest level of enlightenment

This world that carries mental illness
To the highest level of intelligence
Sometimes jumping like a yoyo
Depressed states hiding within inspiration

Thinking so expressive
In words carrying vivid images
From one void to another
Never duplicated but mirrored
Within reflective interpretations

In the communication with others
A solitary world is concocted
In stimulated teaching of others
Taking on your personalities glow

So in this special composting
Things will ferment in intensity
Into to the worst vinegar
Or the greatest vintage of wine
Tasted by other people’s minds


D.Lester Young 9/23/2002
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (09-23-2002 01:11 PM).]

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-23 01:00 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
2 posted 2002-09-23 01:02 PM


Great write! I especially liked the last stanza.

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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