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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-09-23 06:10 AM

Bathed in ivory ray of light
weighed by circumstances found
gravity of each day takes night
keeping them still, quiet and sound

Consumed by emptiness unleashed
silent secrets fall from the sky
and the shadows begin to feast
questioning such answers of why

For each there must be another
for which their heart may ache or swoon
unknown, but loved like no other
upon this darkside of the moon

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-09-23 07:01 AM

"For each there must be another
for which their heart may ache or swoon
unknown, but loved like no other
upon this darkside of the moon"

Oh, I liked this very much Ctowen. You've explored this from a unique vantage, very nicely done indeed. I loved the phrase "and the shadows begin to feast". Much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2002-09-23 09:38 AM

I liked ivory ray of light... and the poem...

regards,
sudhir

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-09-23 10:10 AM

This poem is good.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-23 11:10 AM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Craig, this is so very true, the reason of why can be so obscure and you wait for gravity to turn the dark side over so you can find the answers! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

5 posted 2002-09-23 11:14 AM

Nice!!!!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2002-09-24 01:25 AM

For each there must be another
for which their heart may ache or swoon

There is a lot of truth and consequence in the sheerness of the ivory light...Oooo your words read so well beneath the moon. No wonder I was tossing and turning last night!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-09-24 06:24 AM

I hope it's true,Craig,that there is another for each of us. Beauifully written.
Sandra

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