Open Poetry #22 |
Septembered Eyes |
Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Two skylines shimmered loud as proud mountains majesties heraldries of past forevers to last. as skies of spacious plains of rolling nourishing rains. as seas betweened, evergladed by swayings of grain. as brotherhoods of understoods pondered long forever strong as Septembered eyes foundered, wondered and cried. two skylines shimmered proud. [This message has been edited by Radrook (09-23-2002 01:24 PM).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully descriptive Radrook ... a lovely view you've painted here. Very much enjoyed the imagery within this piece. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Radrook Good palatte, enjoyed the read. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like how descriptive it is. Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Radrook, this is so powerfully touching, sweet friend, my heart still always grieves to that day but also we have become closer to Him and He shall always shine His grace on us all! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Radrook, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I love the way this flows alaong. Nicely written! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Awesome! Extremely well done, and I love the presentation! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome write - enjoyed thoroughly. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
as brotherhoods of understoods pondered long forever strong as Septembered eyes foundered, wondered and cried. Written with grace and understanding. Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Thank you all for your encouraging responses. God bless! |
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