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Fandaen
Junior Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 47
Ft Worth, Texas

0 posted 2002-09-21 12:42 PM

You stand there, eyes full of tears
I call out to you and you do not answer
I approach you to hug your pain away
But you turn from me
Seeing your pain is like daggers through my heart
Yet you wont confide in me
For hours you stare at the vase on the mantle
And ignore all of my attempts to console you
I love you with all my heart
And need to share your pain
Again I hold my arms out to take you in
And again you walk away
I look at the mantle where that damn vase sits
And next to, the picture of our wedding day
Then the memories came back to me
Of that Sunday morn
With the sun shining on your face
And the kiss I placed upon your lips
Then the blinding flash of light
I turned and you were not there
I could see the flames come from the car
And then it all became clear
The love we shared was strong and true
And it brought me back to you
I know you feel me standing there
But in that vase my ashes are kept
Live my love you deserve that much
Let your mourning cease
I had died 6 years ago live my love and love

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2002-09-21 12:47 PM

seems so tragic and heartfelt. I suppose we all need some time on our own for a while.. im no stranger to this Fandaen. enjoyed the read

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-09-21 12:48 PM

Darn, this gave me chills. Oh how very moving and well done. Wonderful write.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Fandaen
Junior Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 47
Ft Worth, Texas

3 posted 2002-09-21 01:02 PM

I messed up the title on this one
any suggestions for a proper one are appriciated.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-09-21 02:19 PM

This is so tragic. Good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-09-21 08:27 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Fandaen, this sounds so tragic and sad, my heart goes out to you both and I hope he can have the courage to open his heart to you as you only want to help and have him share his sorrow that hurts him inside so you can heal his wounds! (big hugggsssss) My prayers are with you both, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Tommysgirl03
Junior Member

since 2002-09-21

Posts 35

6 posted 2002-09-21 08:39 PM

This is absolutely Beautiful. How very touching. The lost of a loved one is always hard to deal with, knowing that they are in a much better place, she make us joyful, but it doesn't I know. Great write.

Fandaen
Junior Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 47
Ft Worth, Texas

7 posted 2002-09-24 05:04 AM

Not to worry all it is a work of pure fiction partly inspired by "What Dreams May Come"

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