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Much……. Much Too Much
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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The very thought of you Sends me into motion acting like a school girl, a giddy daydreaming notion damp palms, starry eyes racing heart in a whirl, fluttering butterflies, at loss for even words, It seems that love has me and such As I long for you Much, too much Give me a chance, honey Please let this love bloom Into a lasting romance And may I fully express That I truly love you And I yearn for your touch Much, much too much You leave me breathless Your voice moves my soul With just one of your kisses I loose all control I need you so badly I want you, baby Much, much…… Way too much Poetry is: Passion, imagination and intellect running together. Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa [This message has been edited by CSKpoet (09-23-2002 12:01 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Wonderfully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Loner: thanks ..you are always nearby. I appreciate you! This one is a bit weird for me...LOL but ya nevah know... hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I know this desire all too well, sweet friend, I love my Joanna so much and when I think of her I feel so lovesick and want to lie down and I fall asleep dreaming of her! (kiss on cheek) May true love always fill your heart with delight, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh I don't know, Cheryl...it certainly comes across as a song of the heart to me... perhaps, not too much, yet...but more to come? You sound happy. Hope so! |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Almost like a drug, this love. Beautiful!! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Noah: yes Love can be dangerous(smiles) but wonderful...thanks for the comments Sunshine: Yes I am happy( my muse might write otherwise, but then she never did listen to me.) I did hear this one to music as a song... one that persisted much too much long...LOL thanks for your sweet inquiry and the comment hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Krisshankins: wel it sounds like "on a drug" hehe,but I assure you it was sober and maybe not the best my muse can do,therefore amusing at the least...thanks for the time to read and comment Cher Poetry is: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Cher! Much loved! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Thank you enchanting one! You are always a breath of fresh air. thanks for leaving me kind words this morning. hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Schoolgirl romance-thoughts tempered with adult realizations. Water and fire. |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
well done. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
BSQ: hehehe... no wonder I can't get anywhere...much much too much of soggy wood..smiles... thanks much! Effigy: thanks for the read and time to comment..I was not exactly excited with this write either and it may need more cooking, so to speak... hugs, cher Poetry is: Passion, imagination and intellect running together. Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa [This message has been edited by CSKpoet (09-25-2002 01:19 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It nice to know what you want...James |
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