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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-09-22 11:58 PM


The very thought of you
Sends me into motion
acting like a school girl,
a giddy daydreaming notion
damp palms, starry eyes
racing heart in a whirl,
fluttering butterflies,
at loss for even words,
It seems that love
has me and such
As I long for you
Much, too much

Give me a chance, honey
Please let this love bloom
Into a lasting romance
And may I fully express
That I truly love you
And I yearn for your touch
Much, much too much

You leave me breathless
Your voice moves my soul
With just one of your kisses
I loose all control
I need you so badly
I want you, baby
Much, much……
Way too much


Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa


[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (09-23-2002 12:01 AM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-23 12:01 PM


Wonderfully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

CSKpoet
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2 posted 2002-09-23 12:04 PM


Loner: thanks ..you are always nearby. I appreciate you!
This one is a bit weird for me...LOL
but ya nevah know...
hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-23 11:26 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I know this desire all too well, sweet friend, I love my Joanna so much and when I think of her I feel so lovesick and want to lie down and I fall asleep dreaming of her! (kiss on cheek) May true love always fill your heart with delight, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-09-23 11:28 AM



Oh I don't know, Cheryl...it certainly comes across as a song of the heart to me...

perhaps, not too much, yet...but more to come?  You sound happy.  Hope so!  

Krishankins
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5 posted 2002-09-23 11:29 AM


Almost like a drug, this love.
Beautiful!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

CSKpoet
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6 posted 2002-09-23 01:29 PM


Noah: yes Love can be dangerous(smiles) but wonderful...thanks for the comments

Sunshine: Yes I am happy( my muse might write otherwise, but then she never did listen to me.) I did hear this one to music as a song... one that persisted much too much long...LOL thanks for your sweet inquiry and the comment

hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
7 posted 2002-09-23 01:34 PM


Krisshankins: wel it sounds like "on a drug" hehe,but I assure you it was sober and maybe not the best my muse can do,therefore amusing at the least...thanks for the time to read and comment
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Enchantress
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8 posted 2002-09-23 01:35 PM


Beautiful Cher!  Much loved!  
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
9 posted 2002-09-23 01:40 PM


Thank you enchanting one! You are always a  breath of fresh air. thanks for leaving me kind words this morning.
hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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10 posted 2002-09-23 06:35 PM


Schoolgirl romance-thoughts
tempered with adult realizations.

Water
and fire.

Effigy
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11 posted 2002-09-23 06:35 PM


well done.
CSKpoet
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12 posted 2002-09-23 11:10 PM


BSQ: hehehe... no wonder I can't get anywhere...much much too much of soggy wood..smiles... thanks much!

Effigy: thanks for the read and time to comment..I was not exactly excited with this write either and it may need more cooking, so to speak...
hugs, cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (09-25-2002 01:19 AM).]

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2002-09-24 05:39 PM


It nice to know what you want...James
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