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~ViXeN~
Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada

0 posted 2002-09-22 03:04 PM

Forbidden girl
To intertwine
Sudden recklessness
Love left behind

Truth is revealed
All is known
Time stands still
Carries a new tone

Trade my heart
One brand new
My soul to be free
Not black and blue

Tightened chest
Violent cries
Broken spirit
Twisted lies

Feelings torn
Strings to pull
Scars to heal
Head is full

Not all is forgiven
Trust is lost
Emotions flood
Now pay the cost

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2002-09-22 03:18 PM

Being hurt in that way is hard to forgive and hard to forget. I liked the way the words flowed. enjoyed the read.

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

2 posted 2002-09-22 03:43 PM

This piece has a serious touch of reality to it, I have been there and understand the emotions that flowed throughout the entire poem.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2002-09-22 04:26 PM

Well said...this clear and simple pain took my heart in quiet crippling grip. Powerful truth shared well with friends here.
ThisDiamond

~ViXeN~
Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada

4 posted 2002-09-22 04:45 PM

Thanks guys...
Not all is peachy, but the best way to vent feelings besides punching the walls
hahaha
ill be okay though

Im a survivor...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2002-09-22 05:42 PM

Very well written. I've been there and it's hard trusting again - but you will, in time. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

~ViXeN~
Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada

6 posted 2002-09-23 11:37 AM

I know ill be better in time.

But time is the key word. Tomorrows a brand new day, and I intend to live life as it comes

~ViXeN~
Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada

7 posted 2002-09-23 11:48 AM

Thanks again....
I know Ill be better in time... Time is the key word...

But, tomorrow's a brand new day

~ViXeN~
Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada

8 posted 2002-09-23 11:53 AM

ooppps
sorry, double post. the first one didnt work at first... and im not sure how to delete replies...

my bad

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