Open Poetry #22 |
Paintings of Paris |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Guide me River of peace my eyes sailing through empty streets Dreams golden nights paintings of paris-- I have walked this land My hands like water clouds falling through blackness In silence still -- ocean blue -- sunsets - jewels of lonely skies Edge walking in thoughts my own I claim all however painful, powerful, truthful manner of grace long forgotten ticks Clocks bleed time each fall each echo our lips hushed voices beyond control seperated love and do we hate? can I be so human to remember your breath cold worn on shoulders eight walking, among paths of lost worlds with no canopys no shelter I just a shell, broken wings, a prayer in unwanted travel I let you die in my mind; in my heart sweet abondonment of any rising sun cry now your graceful birds are looking down upon earth with raven eyes can I ever understand I have been found I need some distraction |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hi Lauren, yes, I think you will be found. Beautiful words and good to see you again... Barry |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I let you die in my mind; in my heart sweet abondonment of any rising sun cry now your graceful birds are looking down upon earth with raven eyes can I ever understand I have been found" (big hugggsssssss) Oh Lauren, this is so beautifully sad, sweet friend, your wonderful poems are always such beautiful works of art and fill these pages like galleries of art! (kiss on cheek) Here, you are always found and are special to us all, God Bless You, yay, now may your heart always light like Paris at Christmastide, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I let you die in my mind; in my heart sweet abondonment of any rising sun cry now your graceful birds are looking down upon earth with raven eyes can I ever understand I have been found ------------------------------------------- Lauren~Your writing...your expression is just so incredible..I am left speechless. This is amazing! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It seems that you have been found, Lauren... and your poem is awesome... I really enjoyed it. ~ loving chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - I'd love to be read this touching poem in soft whispers... BC |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
one of the best poems I will be reading this day... enjoyed much. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lauren dear friend...your words have been missed.....and still they whisper across the page. Beautiful. Missed you and love you too dear If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I remember those days, lost among the colors. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
you have been found, and i'm glad i was one of those to find this. quote:so simple a line, yet again, so strong. to be able to say so much in so little is a talent indeed. breathing as usual. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I let you die in my mind; in my heart sweet abondonment of any rising sun Your reach so far to a place of reckon, and always you touch and lay your words down so smoothly. Oh Lauren, I so loved this picture of your Paris........ hugging you~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
beautiful! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A poetic painting of wistful whisperings... ~ l-o-v-e-l-y ~ EA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
in a small corner of a museum somewhere. . . there is a portrait. . . of the poet. . . excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
I must agree most definately beautiful!! I'm glad I read Consider yourself fuzzed |
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