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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-09-20 08:19 PM

“ONE SOUTHERN NIGHT”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Sun going down over the horizon,
ocean skies aflame at sunset…
Surf flowing in calm and gentle,
breezes caress your silhouette …

Shadows dancing on the wall,
ecstasy of you in motion…
Your hips sway with a beat,
southern islands, calypso…

Warmness of you beckons,
closer embrace, we continue…
Lips touch to softness of skin,
senses wake to this we brew…

Your hair like silk this evening,
fragrance sensual to inspire…
Yours I would be this night,
one southern night in desire…
~~~~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-09-20 08:24 PM

BillCharles~
Oooooooh boyyyyyy !
This one 'cooks'~
*sighs* reverberating from the South~

This is delicious~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2002-09-20 09:01 PM

Hello Bill

Your words were the epitome of everything romantic and were so very much enjoyed.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-09-20 09:04 PM

Like all your poetry, there is romance, music and lots of good imagery. This is lovely...it made me sigh...........

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2002-09-20 09:11 PM

Mmmmm...may I have one of those special drinks with the little paper umbrellas in them? This is lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-09-20 09:15 PM

....and to think I got to do a dooo-et with you!

This sure is some pretty writin'!!!

~ I'm swaying to the music of your words ~

EA

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2002-09-20 09:18 PM

Bill

I live in southern California...does that count? It sizzles here too, like your poem.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-09-20 09:36 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, may she always croon jazz to your ears and make your blues coo like silk always, this is wonderful, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and ligh always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-09-20 09:38 PM

Love it Bill!!
May I have the same drink my sister is having?

~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

9 posted 2002-09-21 09:53 AM

Oh BC you rascal you! This is soooo romantic. Loving it lots.

Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2002-09-21 10:19 AM

What a lovely piece, Bill ... beautiful imagery to set the mood of romance. Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2002-09-23 11:49 AM

Beautiful and romantic... I like this very much! *S*

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