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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-09-22 01:38 PM




Taking in The Sunshine
~By Sue~

Go out and enjoy the sunshine
Forget your troubles for a day
It helps to take a break from all
That seems to come your way

Tomorrow is a brand new day
A new beginning for everyone
Leave your troubles of yesterday
Go out and have a little fun

Go out and relax for awhile
Take in the rays of the sunshine
Beaming down on your smile
Leaving your worries all behind

9-22-02




© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Crysania
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1 posted 2002-09-22 01:40 PM


I, being an amatuer, really do not have an opinion you should care about. Bu-ut, I think your poem is very good. We all need a little sunshine sometimes.

- Crysania

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2 posted 2002-09-22 02:07 PM


Wonderful feeling to this one Sue!
Love the pic as well!
~hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2002-09-22 02:10 PM


So good to see your new found sunshine. Looks real good on you my friend.  
All Best Wishes, ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-09-22 03:34 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, I love this wonderfully upbeat thought, sweet friend, yes, may we all soak up the sun and find promises into tomorrow, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine
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5 posted 2002-09-22 03:49 PM



Good to hear and read the upbeat
of this, Sue...

long overdue...and I'm liking the new photo!

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2002-09-22 04:07 PM


SweetSue~
So happy to read a happy from you~
You soak up that sunshine ...
and reset those bio-rhythms~
Love ya' gal~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-09-22 04:30 PM


SmartChick
Who is the new fish? LOL nice one, enjoyed.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2002-09-22 05:17 PM


Sue, I'm sitting here crying. Gosh, this is such a happy, happy,  positive outlook poem from you.

YEAH!!!!!   Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

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