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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-09-21 08:40 PM


If I was a feather that could float free
Riding the whispers of someone’s dreams
Free falling and rising in whirling inspirations
The magic stirring in a mind’s delight

If I was a rainbow rose, so delicate
That the texture captured a person’s heart
Fragile aromatic incense in hypnotic trances
In every feeling, a color of glorious paradise

If I was a musical instrument
Whose voice cast spells of pure rapture
In notes with such special intensity
That the cries where captured
In the music heard forever

If I was a mural so dynamic
That eyes where automatically blended
In thought of a million combinations
Amazed strokes melting your soul
Into a stupendous mindscape

If I was a poem so fantastic
Mesmerizing the brain in waves
Of hallucinogenic astonishment
Cherishing every nerve rippling within
The climatic eruptions of interpretations
Becoming abundantly crystal clear

If I was an artist
With such a inner devotion
Reaching for the pinnacle
Amid all possible obstacles
Draining in such negativity
That there is no going back
For the dream of a feather
In the texture of my heart
In a voice with such intensity
Blending in such dynamic mind stokes
In such cherished interpretations
Creating a special place of its very own

D.Lester Young 9/21/2002
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)


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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
1 posted 2002-09-22 09:23 AM


beautiful images and thoughts.

Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood
L cohen

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-09-22 01:23 PM


Very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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