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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-09-20 08:58 PM




I had always lacked confidence
From the day that I was born
Some days were filled with negatives
And I felt sad and so forlorn

But one day I found my calling
As I took my pen in hand
Soon the positives took over
As my heart held firm command

I opened up my heart to you
As you looked into my soul
No longer was I frightened
Finally my life felt whole

I continued to pen my feelings
Sending them far across the sea
The friends I've made are many
I feel much warmth surrounding me

I would write about my life
And my infinite love of the sea
You would read about my father
And see how much he meant to me

My words of love and romance
Would cause your hearts to soar
I would often write of lovers
Whose feet barely touched the floor

Every facet of my writing
Shows a different side of me
As I indulge myself much further
Into my love of poetry

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
1 posted 2002-09-20 09:13 PM


This is beautiful, Suetang. I am glad you indulged yourself into your poetry. Because, I love to read it.
NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
2 posted 2002-09-20 09:17 PM


Sue, there is a saying that writing is good for the soul and for you dear friend, it seems to be true. You have blossomed like the beautiful flowers in your garden.

I am so grateful to be able to read your words as you share your heart and be your friend.

Hugs ~~ Marti

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-20 09:45 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, you have gone such a very long way, and I am so blessed you are here with us all and I truly believe it is your fathers spirit and all your loved ones that is helping you forward and I know with your golden flower heart you will find the most wonderful joy! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038
USA
4 posted 2002-09-20 10:27 PM


It is the you, that was always there, that you just found a path to, Sue.
In a pleasant sort of way, your poem was  almost directed to a personna:  Poetry, like it was alive.  

Then again, it is isn't it?  
Alive. . .
jeff

[This message has been edited by ShadowRider (09-20-2002 10:28 PM).]

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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since 2002-09-20
Posts 155
Fraggle Rock
5 posted 2002-09-20 10:30 PM


True..everyone can relate I am sure..you know..I consider my pen my sword and my paper my shield..I admit I sway to the negative side of things, but it feels so much better when I get it out and share and get positive feed back from myself by pouring it out and from my friends and strangers who comfort me by saying they care and relate going into my library most definately!
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
6 posted 2002-09-21 11:41 PM


“But one day I found my calling
As I took my pen in hand”

Ya know, we’re kinda glad you did! Keep writing!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
7 posted 2002-09-22 12:09 PM


I think you speak for many of us here, Sue...
We have found poetry, which has helped us find ourselves... and also helped us find this wonderful family in this lovely home of blue...
~ lots of loving hugs from way across the world

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

passing shadows
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8 posted 2002-09-22 12:12 PM


share on Sue my dear, we love your life and you! Your poetry is beautiful!
Larry C
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since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
9 posted 2002-09-22 12:39 PM


Sue,
And what a gift you have given so freely to us! Excellent write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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