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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2002-09-20 08:15 PM

In the shape of mentor,
you teach me
the art of
intimidation

stand
three inches
from my face

puffs of breath
blow tiny hairs
at my temples

I step backward
to make space,
you grab my shoulder,
hold me in place
we pose

I look away
two cold hands
grasp my head,
direct my eyes
to focus

Your pupils widen
for several seconds
I see you
and the real intent

to take me

© 2002 Cor

[This message has been edited by Corinne (09-20-2002 10:53 PM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-09-20 08:26 PM

Corinne~
Oh wow .... this is a captivating piece~

No one gets inside my two-foot bubble ...
unless I let them~

*Hugs* gal~
~*marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2002-09-20 08:36 PM

Wonderfully emotive, Corinne ... I could "feel" this ... you captured this type of feeling perfectly. Well done, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2002-09-20 09:00 PM

Hello Corinne

Such a powerful and thought provoking piece of writing.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2002-09-20 09:10 PM

This sounds like a very uncomfortable situation. I like my bounderies, and space.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-09-20 10:32 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Corinne, I understand how you feel, reading this this too would make me feel uncomfortable if that particular situation occured! (sigh) This is wonderfully said, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

6 posted 2002-09-20 10:43 PM

Thought provoking indeed, Kris, keep up the good work.

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-09-20 10:47 PM

Corinne

Some think they have power to intimidate, but can be felled by grace. This felt very real. Take care of you.

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

8 posted 2002-09-20 10:47 PM

Thought provoking indeed, Kris, keep up the good work.

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

9 posted 2002-09-20 10:49 PM

Thought provoking indeed, Kris, keep up the good work.

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

10 posted 2002-09-20 10:50 PM

Thought provoking indeed, Kris, keep up the good work.

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

11 posted 2002-09-20 10:51 PM

Thought provoking indeed, Kris, keep up the good work.

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

12 posted 2002-09-20 10:52 PM

Thought provoking indeed, Kris, keep up the good work.

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