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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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Sunlight streams over rumpled satin and kisses my mind with a fresh vision of you. Cloudscapes meander in the blue autumn wind I listen to you breathe As morning reveals her mysterious splendour in the pink eastern sky. Restless surf sings softly against black velvet sand…. Morning doves coo to the serenade of a new dawning day, while I lie tucked secure and warm in your embrace of radiant love, born of tranquil beauty, and ultimate revelation….. And as you lie in the mists of slumber, I am the woman who dreams of you. Poetry is: |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautiful dream, stunning fulfillment in your write. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Thanks so much,Kethry. aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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Moonlight Romeo 
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Dream on, and wake to that dream. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Cher, That's it! Time to move to Hawaii.  Mike |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Cher, I agree with squirrel....time to move to Alohaland.....One problem though???? They expect me to pay for the plane ticket.. and I think my kids might miss me....Aha! Got it, bring them too.....boy would they have a ball.... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I really liked the ending and the beginning to your daydreams and all that they encompass. Lovely work! |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Moonlight Romeo:writing the dream and then living it sounds wonderful to me BSquirrel: hey come on down..bring your sweetheart and I can see what lovely poems you 2 will make  Magnus: hmmmm Barry, you might nevah like go home again... ..so pack em up and send da kids COD or by banana boat. ..  hehehe awww you guys just talkin story to Cher James and myself (your Pips poets in Hawaii) are the only ones here, I think, who post poems while the rest of you are asleep..LOL and James found himself a hula girl  so he is too busy now...BluesSeranade: thank you for putting up with my fantasy scribbles and humor as well..hehe Hawaii just does that to ya.. aloha and hugs to all.. smiles, Cher Poetry is: Passion, imagination and intellect running together. Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa [This message has been edited by CSKpoet (09-19-2002 01:19 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sweet dreams...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you always write such gorgeous romantic visions, you are a treasure to us all, may you always dream of one another happily, we all love youso much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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