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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-09-18 02:00 AM





Sunlight streams over rumpled satin
and kisses my mind
with a fresh vision of you.
Cloudscapes meander
in the blue autumn wind
I listen to you breathe
As morning reveals
her mysterious splendour
in the pink eastern sky.

Restless surf sings softly
against black velvet sand….
Morning doves coo to the serenade
of a new dawning day,
while I lie tucked secure
and warm in your embrace
of radiant love,
born of tranquil beauty,
and ultimate revelation…..

And as you lie in the mists of slumber,
I am the woman who dreams of you.



Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-09-18 06:18 AM


Beautiful dream, stunning fulfillment in your write.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
2 posted 2002-09-18 10:56 AM


Thanks so much,Kethry.
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you
3 posted 2002-09-18 11:57 AM


Dream on, and wake to that dream.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-09-18 11:58 AM


Cher,
That's it! Time to move to Hawaii.

Mike

Magnus
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5 posted 2002-09-18 10:49 PM


Cher,  I agree with squirrel....time to move
to Alohaland.....One problem though????
They expect me to pay for the plane ticket..
and I think my kids might miss me....Aha!
Got it,  bring them too.....boy would they
have a ball....

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
6 posted 2002-09-18 11:15 PM


I really liked the ending and the beginning to your daydreams and all that they encompass.

Lovely work!

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise
7 posted 2002-09-19 01:15 AM


Moonlight Romeo:writing the dream and then living it sounds wonderful to me

BSquirrel: hey come on down..bring your sweetheart and I can see what lovely poems you 2 will make

Magnus: hmmmm Barry, you might nevah like go home again... ..so pack em up and send da kids COD or by banana boat. ..
hehehe

awww you guys just talkin story to Cher
James and myself (your Pips poets in Hawaii) are the only ones here, I think, who post poems while the rest of you are asleep..LOL and James found himself a hula girl so he is too busy now...

BluesSeranade: thank you for putting up with my fantasy scribbles and humor as well..hehe
Hawaii just does that to ya..

aloha and hugs to all..
smiles, Cher


Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (09-19-2002 01:19 AM).]

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2002-09-20 07:50 PM


Sweet dreams...James
Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-09-20 10:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you always write such gorgeous romantic visions, you are a treasure to us all, may you always dream of one another happily, we all love youso much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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