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Open Poetry #22

frustration

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2002-09-20 12:43 PM

fermented

    boiled

condensed

    distilled

yielding
    a single

drop

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-20 12:45 PM

Very cool poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-09-20 12:47 PM

One would think that all of our inner frustrations would produce more than just a drop, don't you...? I know I have...but...when that drop hits the water, and ripples, dilutes, spreads out, dissolves into the bigger, better picture of life...

perhaps that is all it needed to be...

Well done, Brian.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-09-20 12:51 PM

A single drop?
I'll bet that drop is rancid

I love how you did this.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-09-20 12:51 PM

Is this in response to my lachrymose comments made yesterday regarding the quality of my poetry?

I love this poem, brian. I can feel all the crumpled balls of paper itching to be opened.

Send the rain,
Mike

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

5 posted 2002-09-20 12:56 PM

I see what you mean in life. It can be a real pain in the neck at times.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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