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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-09-20 12:20 PM



Evolutionary


Helium balloon
Captured colors on white string,
Released to free flight.


Helium balloon,
Blossoms from the tank to be,
Quickly tied for he,

Captured colors on white string,
A small child’s play thing,
That follows him all day long
,
Released to free flight,
Drifts into the clouds so white
Flying free like dreams belong


Gloom
Just word play
caught in a busy day
Daydreaming a moment away



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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-20 12:21 PM


Interesting thoughts. Good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-09-20 12:55 PM


I like the lighter side of you
I like it a lot!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Nan
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3 posted 2002-09-20 01:01 PM


Levity... It becomes you, Sir Gloom...

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just out of reach
4 posted 2002-09-20 01:10 PM


Gloom - this was a pleasure to read, easy going and serene. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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