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Stained Glass Serenity
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Stained Glass Serenity |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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 held together with soft lead prayers pleading, “Have mercy” for all that I have done in past. of inner fade and outer blue-- everything we long to do is held within our grasp. miracles in edge of shine. Tell me I am rancid, yet, I’m water, changing to fine wine… and bellow name of God--disguised... within the notes of love composed singing in a holy choir. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
YAY!! It worked.. and both the graphic and the poem are beautiful...as are you.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am jumping up and down here...hardly worth my excitement, but yes!!! I can stop obsessing with it now...and sharon? I have to thank YOU...and KIT? You took a great deal of your personal time too..(tell the hubby I'm sorry) but wow...you ladies? ARE FANTASTIC...love you both...  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
And it turned out beautifully, Karen... How did you get your picture into the stained glass? I love the poem too... both are especially lovely and especially you.  ~ chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Just look at you go, girlie~ I'm so proud of you !!! I love the tessellation~  Now .. you 'know' we'll just be expecting more and more and more~  Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sen, That was worth every second of agony it took to bring it here.  Mikey, in soft lead |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
some kickin' lines here lady (and cool pic too) - remember though: Articles are not evil. Repeat after me: Articles are not evil. hugs |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
the finest wine....  b (the pic? worth the wait ) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks all... Lyra...it's so lovely to have you home! smooches you! (and dunno how I did it...was sort of just covering up indiscretions...heh heh) but ooooh...so good to see you!!!! Marge? chuckling? you startled me with the "tesselation"...the entire thing started with a photo scanned that um...well, let's just call the stained glass? "tasselation!" wink... C...it's always a pleasure to have you pop in! Still waiting tho, for you to tell me just where I should put those ... "oh-so-desirable" articles of yours! oooh!  Thanks lovie... Mike? I'll not have y'running about the forum in soft lead form....don't make me come over there! bwahahaha  Brian...oh yeah...brian... mmmm....tasted fine wine just typing the above. Thank you... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
like the idea my friend of the image and the lines..of the person being but bits of colored..... obvious you struggled to make the visual work here..and without it quite honstly the poem would lose some of its impact on the reader. The words are wonderful.... the image adds to it... |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Pieces of shards that make up the whole. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A wonderful presentation and I loved the final line Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sweetie, my silly ISP won't let me see the pic, but you can be guarantdarnteed I'll be back to peek at the pic... but I loved the poem! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wooohooo! Serenity ... you did it!!! This is just wonderful! The work you put both into the graphics, and the poem is really amazing, and the flow between the two compliment each other beautifully. You did a great job on this Karen ... keep up the excellent work, my friend! Best wishes and great big hugs, /Kit |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Kit?  laughing...yanno what the problem was? I wasn't typing the quotations in the html tag...sigh...groan..but? well...one step at a time...now? If I can only figure out how to put that pic up in Times Square!!! Don't suppose ya could help with that one, huh? Thanks you, and Sharon, and yes, I am slowly figuring stuff out...very slowly, but ooooh...hopefully I'll hear that "click" and ZOOOM!!!! You are a lovely lady. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
cool If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 both the poem and the picture are serenity cool. |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Yeah! Its up! already gave you my favorite lines... so ill just say again how much i love this one. lovely fall days to ya... how is the weather there now? (was cold enough for a fire this mornin'! ) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL @ Times Square ... With your fortitude and stay-at-em-ness, Karen ... I do think you will find your way to Times Square! Zooooom ....  Hugs, /Kit |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Let me my lungs breathe pipe organ and bellow name of God--disguised... within the notes of love composed singing in a holy choir. with fingers crossed"  (smiles) Oh my gosh, I LOVE IT, how did they do that, they've done such a good job portraying the beautiful you in stained glass, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) I'm delighted you shared this with us, now I'm excited, this is breathtaking, we all love youn so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-21-2002 09:02 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent work! I love this! Very creative! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Woohooo, look at you gorgeous! Beautiful pic m'dear. and the poem is fantastic. hugs you M |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Both the image and the words are perfect! Together, they make a masterpiece! I absolutely adore this! |
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