Open Poetry #22 |
Reflections (short love poem) |
haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
Reflections Tranquil day of motionless wonderings Thoughts disturbing the bustling of quiet As the focus of my whole bliss is remembered… you. Cognizant of the close propinquity of your beloved soul Just minutes away… does not satisfy my covet As daydream of what is… was… to be felt are rapt… your love Surface… at this moment… soon my love… for all eternity… ... hope you like it.. My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
And I do like it HaydenJames ... this has a lovely whispered flow throughout the lines. Very nicely captured. Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (09-23-2002 07:32 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
haydenjames Nice, enjoyed the read. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like it. Good write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...and I'm sure she will!--I know I did! ~ smiles ~ EA |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
quote: This says it all! Enjoyed Hayden ~Sheri |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I agree with Kit, nice flow. Whispers in the lines. Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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