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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-09-19 10:45 AM


I waken
to the brush of your
soft lips
against my forehead.
My sleepy eyes
take in your
countenance
as I reach for you
drawing you near,
feeling your warmth
and knowing that is
fired from your
wonderful
heart.
How I love you
and how loved I feel.
How can I ever express
this deepest of feelings?
My vocabulary fails me.
My eyes cannot speak
eloquently enough.
My fingers’ tactile tales
do not tell the story.
Only my soul can
communicate adequately.
Thank God we are
soul mates.




Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (09-19-2002 11:01 AM).]

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-09-19 11:01 AM




(smiles) This is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you and your soulmate together share a life of happiness together, you always have such wonderful thoughts to share, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-19-2002 11:02 AM).]

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2 posted 2002-09-19 11:09 AM


Your "vocabulary" did not fail you, nor did it fail this reader!

As you well know, I am a firm believer in soul mates and I often write about them. This was superbly done, dear Interloper!

~ I know whereof you speak and you did it so well!!! ~

EA

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3 posted 2002-09-19 11:22 AM


InterLoper~

'How I love you
and how loved I feel.'


Says a heart-full~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2002-09-19 11:24 AM


simply beautiful!
Thomas119gold
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5 posted 2002-09-19 11:24 AM


Like it love is in the air
Thomas

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6 posted 2002-09-19 12:16 PM


Bob darling heart you know how gorgeous this is don’t you? If I looked up the word Romance it would have as a definition see Interloper. Have you any real knowledge of how superb this writing is? It is stunning in its beauty and your vocabulary is more than able to dress this delight in wonder. Exquisite writing darling heart utterly utterly exquisite.

My breath drawing the heat of this within
Flowing though my soul a hint of desired sin
A touch that wraps the need of glowing night
Inside the smile that shines with moons soft light
The taste that begs to be consumed like this
A whisper of soul that speaks of living’s bliss
I feel the touch that whispers throughout me
The wonder of what joy can truly be
And if the sigh will hold your touch I’ll share
The love that flows in lines you wrote with care
Inside the whispering heart I’ll see the love’s fire
Then taste the heat of soul’s argent desire
         A soul-mate the other piece that matches me
         The enigma that knows what will be will be

I love it love it love it utterly YOU surely write beautifully. And you know as certainly as eggs are eggs I love this


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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7 posted 2002-09-19 12:17 PM


Wonderfully worded declaration of your love..
Beautiful....simply beautiful!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2002-09-19 02:29 PM


Thank you all for reading my work.  This is how I imagine life with another should and can be ... and I know I'm RIGHT!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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