Open Poetry #22 |
. . . soul mates . . . |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I waken to the brush of your soft lips against my forehead. My sleepy eyes take in your countenance as I reach for you drawing you near, feeling your warmth and knowing that is fired from your wonderful heart. How I love you and how loved I feel. How can I ever express this deepest of feelings? My vocabulary fails me. My eyes cannot speak eloquently enough. My fingers’ tactile tales do not tell the story. Only my soul can communicate adequately. Thank God we are soul mates. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (09-19-2002 11:01 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you and your soulmate together share a life of happiness together, you always have such wonderful thoughts to share, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-19-2002 11:02 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your "vocabulary" did not fail you, nor did it fail this reader! As you well know, I am a firm believer in soul mates and I often write about them. This was superbly done, dear Interloper! ~ I know whereof you speak and you did it so well!!! ~ EA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ 'How I love you and how loved I feel.' Says a heart-full~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
simply beautiful! |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Like it love is in the air Thomas |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling heart you know how gorgeous this is don’t you? If I looked up the word Romance it would have as a definition see Interloper. Have you any real knowledge of how superb this writing is? It is stunning in its beauty and your vocabulary is more than able to dress this delight in wonder. Exquisite writing darling heart utterly utterly exquisite. My breath drawing the heat of this within Flowing though my soul a hint of desired sin A touch that wraps the need of glowing night Inside the smile that shines with moons soft light The taste that begs to be consumed like this A whisper of soul that speaks of living’s bliss I feel the touch that whispers throughout me The wonder of what joy can truly be And if the sigh will hold your touch I’ll share The love that flows in lines you wrote with care Inside the whispering heart I’ll see the love’s fire Then taste the heat of soul’s argent desire A soul-mate the other piece that matches me The enigma that knows what will be will be I love it love it love it utterly YOU surely write beautifully. And you know as certainly as eggs are eggs I love this Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderfully worded declaration of your love.. Beautiful....simply beautiful! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Thank you all for reading my work. This is how I imagine life with another should and can be ... and I know I'm RIGHT! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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